McDonald's is once again re-introducing its McRib sandwich for a limited time.
The television commercial supporting the product shows a long-suffering customer waiting for McRibs to return and then rewarded with his favorite McD product. No problem with that. The only problem with this commercial is a simple adjective: sumptuous. The copy describes the McRib as "sumptuous." Really? Here's a dictionary definition of sumptuous.
extremely costly, rich, luxurious, or magnificentThere are things in this world that are truly sumptuous. A McRib sandwich can be many good things, too, but "sumptuous" is a copywriter's fantasy.
When I worked for Leo Burnett advertising, the legend was that Leo kept a drawer full of folksy, honest and even "corny" descriptive adjectives. He believed that a product that was honestly good had "inherent" values that didn't need to be pimped out by over-the-top writing.
I think it made advertising more believable.
1 comment:
I share your appreciation for precise language.
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